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Kat B.
Kat B. is on page 18 of 230
2nd short story is much better. I can at least believe I'm reading WWI horror with better terminology and language choices.
Jul 20, 2026 04:55PM
Death's Other Kingdom: Horror Tales of World War I

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Kat B.
Kat B. is on page 6 of 230
The second use of the word blimp when they were called Zeppelins for the love of God. Couldn't use dirgible? An airship?!
A few pages earlier, a girl says "stressed" in reference to troops.
Strained, troubled? I'll allow some modern language and description, fine. I'll keep going but anachronisms are going to kill me here. I can't get into the story with this writing style. I hope the other stories hold up
Jul 15, 2026 05:45PM
Death's Other Kingdom: Horror Tales of World War I


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