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This is how Book two should have been written/ended! This book is,once again, too focused on the other couples rather than Bill and Julie. I didn't mind focusing on Brittany and Tommy because book two never did it! But this should be able bill and Julie with the other couples sparse throughout
— May 03, 2017 03:24PM
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Grammer and spelling mistakes throughout too. That's annoying and really unprofessional
— May 19, 2017 10:48AM
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Also, it made more sense as to why the series is called "Family By Choice." as a lot of the history was covered in this novel and how/why they are all connected.
— May 19, 2017 06:54AM
Veronica
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Finished on 05/19/17
Nadler has gotten a little better especially with the cliffhanger at the end. However, there was still a lot of filler copy that is unnecessary.
I'm pretty sure I said this earlier but I wanted this to focus more on Julie and Bill but it was focused on Tommy and Brittany which should have happened in the previous book, "If Only."
2.5 out of 5 stars.
— May 19, 2017 06:50AM
Nadler has gotten a little better especially with the cliffhanger at the end. However, there was still a lot of filler copy that is unnecessary.
I'm pretty sure I said this earlier but I wanted this to focus more on Julie and Bill but it was focused on Tommy and Brittany which should have happened in the previous book, "If Only."
2.5 out of 5 stars.
Veronica
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I've noticed two errors. One was during a flashback when Bill was oversees saying he was serving and jack and Stephanie began seeing each other. From what I remember with book one, bill was home when jack and Stephanie were dating, even in the beginning.
There is also a line that says "jack is on he floor playing with his mobile" and they mean Julie's baby David. This stuff erks me. Aren't there proofreaders?!
— May 06, 2017 06:45PM
There is also a line that says "jack is on he floor playing with his mobile" and they mean Julie's baby David. This stuff erks me. Aren't there proofreaders?!
