Sophieee’s Reviews > Wishing Stars > Status Update

I have a horrible feeling that Valhalla is about to die. Because I kept searching for fan art of her and I only found one where they were both extremely young while everyone else had one where they were 18. While she keeps pissing me off because she’s idolizing someone who’s her age, I still can’t bear to see her die.

You know what’s really pissing me off and this author needs to learn, is how to describe a setting. She keeps describing places with long paragraphs and forgetting to describe what the characters is doing in between. She needs to add dialogue and descriptions of movement while describing the setting and she also needs to talk about WHO is in the scene before the SETTINGS. This is actually getting so boring.

“But, I couldn’t complain too much. I had a great mom to come home to
and two decent friends who didn’t mind me joining their duo.” I’ve never related to something more. I felt that line deep in my soul.