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Erin
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I’m going to take a break before deciding whether or not to finish. It’s taken weeks to slowly get to 70ish % with still no real direction in the story. Melissa’s writing style is beautiful but so unnecessarily wordy. Bottom line is that I don’t care about any of the characters. 🤷
— Jul 23, 2026 11:51AM
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