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Lili
Lili is 50% done
Halfway in and I’m feeling zero chemistry between these characters. It feels like…forced. They don’t really have a spark. Like I know the FMC has trauma but liiiiike I’m just not feeling it. 0 tension. The buildup is falling flat so far
Jul 23, 2026 07:37PM
Fever Dream (Emerald Lake, #1)

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