fromlarawithlove’s Reviews > The unseen : DON'T TELL THEM YOU CAN SEE > Status Update

Non the less… can I pls get a second book? Even if the book gave major Shatter me vibes, I enjoined it. I’ll even prod read it for you

There was no end i mean huh what do you mean? Can you PLS explain more.
Where was the romance plot? I was desperate for it.
How maaany times can a main character quote that she is the motherfking main character it was hilarious

Um I kinda feel bad giving a 14 year old author a bad review but u could tell that it’s a 14 old author. Pls proof read your book. So many mistakes!! It was really frustrating. Not only grammar wise mistakes but whole sentences didn’t made sense. Sometimes the logic was gone. In one moment they’re on the street and in another they’re already in the building. Poorly written ending, the whole built up for this?

She’s so pretentious. To „save the world“ and be part of the fighters they have to erase the parents memories. And she immediately said yes because „that’s something she has to do, not just for herself but for the whole world because she couldn’t forgive herself otherwise“

Oh gosh a 17 year old teen who NEEDS to save the world and obviously has the power to do that

This book feels very much like Wattpad and very much like a unfinished draft lol