Julia’s Reviews > Slow Gods > Status Update

Im sorry but saying "live, and blaze bright" as an answer to someone being afraid of a coming war is so weird, it's chliché, I don't like it and it is lazyyyyyyy

Really? The evil laughing?

I feel like this should be more interesting

A lot of pronouns

I love space pilot stories

This is exhausting (not like a Wattpad story though)

This is a really really not-my-cup-of-tea first sentence. Don't you dare have this incredible title and end up being written like a bad Wattpad-fanfiction