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The wonky writing is just too much, I cant get past it
— Jul 26, 2026 06:39PM
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There are so many moments in this that are slightly off. 'He nudges Caleb forward. Those inches of space melt away'. OK, if you nudge something its going further away from you right? Also if he nudges Caleb forward I would then understand that to be Caleb facing away. But they are facing eachother, coming closer together, so it should be 'He pulls Caleb forward', that would get their mouths closer together lol.
— Jul 25, 2026 12:44PM