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Jamie Dawes
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Part 2: Beneath a Starless Sky
Once again, Lizanne reigned supreme. I could have a prolonged day by day recount of her entire life as a book and never be bored.
Clay’s part of the story is significantly improving. I feel like I should know this person he’s met, or at least know MORE about them, but I just don’t.
And the third perspective, it’s important but I don’t enjoy it (don’t want to spoil who)
— Jul 28, 2026 11:14PM
Once again, Lizanne reigned supreme. I could have a prolonged day by day recount of her entire life as a book and never be bored.
Clay’s part of the story is significantly improving. I feel like I should know this person he’s met, or at least know MORE about them, but I just don’t.
And the third perspective, it’s important but I don’t enjoy it (don’t want to spoil who)
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Jamie Dawes
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Part 1: The Reaping
This is pretty slow going for the most part. Lizanne is always in the middle of action, but the other two are just plodding along on their paths.
I’m expecting some excitement in the next section, on all fronts.
— Jul 26, 2026 04:31AM
This is pretty slow going for the most part. Lizanne is always in the middle of action, but the other two are just plodding along on their paths.
I’m expecting some excitement in the next section, on all fronts.