Aimee’s Reviews > Daggermouth > Status Update

I keep forgetting these MCs are in their 30s. Every other thought is just horny or "why don't you like me!!" I feel like im reading about 18-22 year olds. It's so jarring and off putting.
Also Grayson having fridge magnets is the funniest thing to me. "I kill people with my flashy mask and uniform... and over here is my collection of magnets from every killing. (I made the last part up but it's funny to imagine)