Maggi’s Reviews > Ice Darling > Status Update
Maggi
is 60% done
Also FL doesn’t make sense xD the background of these characters and their thoughts and action don’t match. Like some parts are written okay, and then nope this is garbage, I dunno, mixed feelings
— Jul 31, 2026 04:44AM
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Maggi
is 99% done
Meh, did finish it and I liked the story but the characters are badly written. Some dialogues are also just so… I love the idea of female mechanics being cool and all and hot ice hockey players but writing needs improvement.
— Jul 31, 2026 10:57AM
Maggi
is 50% done
Might DNF? ML is not well written, his background doesn’t make sense with how he acts/his thoughts. His is written by a women very clearly and it pulls me out of the story. I understand the writer wants the ideal men…..but his character just doesn’t make sense…
— Jul 31, 2026 04:24AM