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the fucking plot holes and inconsistencies

the lack of details

wasnt this bitch wearing flip flops at the start
and then no mention of them while she had to trek back and forth across this desert alien planet

every detail is so fucking infuriating
bc it doesnt go beyond surface level

this bitch earner herself a prime spot on my nonexistent SHIT FMCS shelf

fuck this bitch and the flip flops

im putting this on my utter shit shelf for many reasons

the shit fmc

the lame ass worldbuilding-mainly the way this guy grew “her” “perfect” dick …. bitch pls.

its out there as a way too stupid explanation for me
too convenient and not imaginative at all

to me
it makes the mmc seem less than real

on top of the overused word FEMALE throughout the book

ugh. fucking ICK.

^there’s no fucking urgency from this bitch

all those women are counting on her
especially her damn sister

and not even for a moment
has this bitch properly thought about that

ESPECIALLY now that she’s drinking pure alien water and getting food in her
she’s so fucking selfish rn i cant stand her

she hasnt tried enough to convey the importance to get water and food and HELP back to the women

so it got better but it’s still mostly shit

mainly bc of this fmc

i could not care less about this fucking bitch

she volunteered, initially, and thats great, but then they made it fair and she ended up picking the short straw anyways so idk they all acted as if it was a big fucking deal

from then on
the bitch was everything under the sun STUPID

even now
alien cum gave her telepathy and yet

the writing style is fucking atrocious

i cannot stand this fmc

there’s this demon character in the show
the good place
its the fake old lady
who switches up when she’s had enough of their shit
and fucking punches them in the fucking face and then yeets herself into the air and flies away, kicking and punting other flying ppl away

i want to punch this bitch in the fucking face
i want to kick her between the legs and rip her hair off

pretty sure i read the blurb for book two first and wanted to read it
but ofc i had to read book one first

i regret it all now

im fucking irritated rn.

chapter one done

i want to dnf. ugh.