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Quite American
Annoying trope of putting the acting thing first in the construction: "A draught through the window cements reality" ... "Pale bumps join into twists... Traitorous lines encircle her chest... Ornate whorls of spiky leaves sprout among them"
Claustrophobic
Doesn't feel very focused around anything, you could easily forget the dig was even happening.
Nell is a very anxious MC and lacks personality
— Aug 02, 2026 10:16AM
Annoying trope of putting the acting thing first in the construction: "A draught through the window cements reality" ... "Pale bumps join into twists... Traitorous lines encircle her chest... Ornate whorls of spiky leaves sprout among them"
Claustrophobic
Doesn't feel very focused around anything, you could easily forget the dig was even happening.
Nell is a very anxious MC and lacks personality
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