Darian Hoffman’s Reviews > The Predator > Status Update
Darian Hoffman
is 75% done
Honestly bored.
Don’t know why. I feel disconnected from these characters because of the way the story is told it’s in 3rd person and mind you I don’t have a problem with that in fantasy books but this is just idk there’s nothing from Tristan’s pov it’s all told from the FMC and I literally have no connection to her. I think a soft DNF is needed for now
— Aug 03, 2026 11:20AM
Don’t know why. I feel disconnected from these characters because of the way the story is told it’s in 3rd person and mind you I don’t have a problem with that in fantasy books but this is just idk there’s nothing from Tristan’s pov it’s all told from the FMC and I literally have no connection to her. I think a soft DNF is needed for now
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