Laurie Jeffrey’s Reviews > His to Save > Status Update

I’m counting down the pages until this book ends.

Atlas seriously needs to be a man. He’s way too sensitive.

There’s a lot of unnecessary filler in this book when the parts that were rushed shouldn’t be rushed and there’s parts in the book that are just un unnecessary for the storyline.

She literally have zero trauma from everything that happened to her. Shes perfectly fine within a few weeks of escaping a monster.

Very little transitions and they weird are jumping from one scene to another scene. I’ve made it to page 250 and I’m bored.

This book is so unrealistic. She goes from being locked in the basement to living her own life without any mental health stuff. She jumps in a relationship with her stepbrother like she didn’t just live years in captivity by his father. They’re moving fast and asking her questions as if no time has passed. Like at target what would you like to do first? How is she supposed to know when it’s been 7-8 years?