Chani’s Reviews > At His Service > Status Update

I'm struggling with this one....:/

This is good, but there are so many inconsistencies. He didn't know her name, yet somehow thought it three pages before learning it. She sat in the chair and somehow sat in it again a paragraph later even though she's never stood. Now he's taking clothes from her arms that she already tossed aside....Did they magically reappear?

That just seems super and over the top risky...Like, what if the girl his brother actually got shows up? And lying? Yikes.