katherine ’s Reviews > The Tales of Arcana Fortune > Status Update

“You’re disgusting,” spat Serena. “Being lonely doesn’t justify trapping someone against their will. I am leaving, and if you take one more step toward me, I will throw the knife.”
this paragraph demonstrates the writing. would say overreacting but she was almost trapped forever but spat is a strong verb.

came before throne of nightmares but feels more young adult
writing is not for me but ima try to tolerate the childishness and overexplaining

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