Corrie Brown’s Reviews > Fury Bound > Status Update

"I reach out through our bond and send consent his way." 🙄🤢
This is not how you do power play dynamics 🙄

Zero chemistry between these two. "You know what? Yeah, fuck it."
It feels like that's how this entire book has been written.

"Once again, I can't tell if I'm being disrespected."
...
You are. Just trust that you are. You haven't done anything worthy of respect.

You can't say that your character is angry and furious but not show it. No part of her actions or internal commentary or conversations or discussions or whatever - no part of her character has been angry until we're being told that she's angry.

Might DNF this.
How *not* to write a female lead in a war/fantasy/romance.

I'm sorry, why are we pretending there's still a love triangle to be had here?