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Dave Stone
is 80% done
I have been amazed by Raven's ability to walk the fine line in this series.
(especially with how annoying I found some parts of Stray Cat & Dead Tired)
This book has been no exception, ...except. Broccoli has been a bit more dumb than I like in a MC.
Lots of media portrays happy people as stupid. It's an old, old stereotype. Raven has managed to avoid this trap, but came really close in this book.
— Aug 10, 2026 01:49AM
(especially with how annoying I found some parts of Stray Cat & Dead Tired)
This book has been no exception, ...except. Broccoli has been a bit more dumb than I like in a MC.
Lots of media portrays happy people as stupid. It's an old, old stereotype. Raven has managed to avoid this trap, but came really close in this book.
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Dave Stone
is 20% done
ah, the first really insufferable character. I could have done without this guy, but in all fairness... He could be much, much worse.
...So, I guess thanks?
— Aug 07, 2026 05:08AM
...So, I guess thanks?