Heather’s Reviews > Sea Change > Status Update

The mythological aspects did not work. We weren’t even sure if it was true?? The heroine started out likable & responsible and became your typical YA heroine. We didn’t even get answers on things, like the hero or the heroine’s family. This needed way more world building. And to top it off we don’t even really know the HEA.

This needs actual world building. Almost no clues to go on & the heroine suspects the hero is a merman! And she’s supposed to be all scientific and logical! She’s nothing but a typical annoying bratty teenager. Super wishy washy about the love interests.

Not just instalove but an instalove triangle. Ugh. Could really do without both those things.

I’ve had this book for years and I’m finally getting around to reading it! It’s ok so far, not liking the side characters, feels like there’s gonna be some drama there. Not a fan of instalove. Build your story first!!