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I really hoped it would get better - it was a cute idea but the writing was extremely choppy. Either the dialogue and descriptions were way too ramble or extremely disjunct. This weird possessiveness toward the end of the book … and way too many large plot points that weren’t set up well or explained thoroughly. Felt half baked and 3 times too long. Oh well.
Aug 12, 2026 07:06AM
Only Lovers in the Building

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