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Typo should be “not only would it be” instead of “not only it would be”

STOPNI LOVE OUR MOTLEY CREW-

Ok wait. This villain, who just had a sword to our MC’s throat, is dead but we don’t even get evidence of his body? We just have to take the characters’ word for it?

Typo should be “blonde” bc she’s female

Yeah I love this, her maneuvering through this story that she knows by heart in order to survive. I absolutely love it. May I hazard…political intrigue?

Typo should be “blonde” bc she’s female

from page 18:
“Kair Toren had beaten me down, but the coins in my hand were proof that kindness existed. Someone in this awful city had been nice to me, and good things did happen. It was hope in my fingers.”

1. I love Maggie. She knows what she’s gotta do, and she’s gonna at least try. She’s a good MC so far
2. There have been one or two run-on sentences in here so far