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Sara
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I’m experiencing a frequent issue with the way this book is written.
It feels like the editor didn’t read and correct the draft, and just let it be published.
There are actions overlapping. First Ranka sees a witch sitting on a wagon. But the witch was actually sitting on the horse.
Ranka is fighting people except she wasn’t and she was kneeling on the ground with her eyes closed(??
It’s pissing me off.
— 15 hours, 33 min ago
It feels like the editor didn’t read and correct the draft, and just let it be published.
There are actions overlapping. First Ranka sees a witch sitting on a wagon. But the witch was actually sitting on the horse.
Ranka is fighting people except she wasn’t and she was kneeling on the ground with her eyes closed(??
It’s pissing me off.
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