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Brooke
Brooke is 85% done
she feels like a kid pretending to be an adult. she keeps swearing and having sex but then bahves like a child and her narrative voice is also very simple and childish. i just really really dont like her as a character, i dont think she’s interesting or special and she just seems really naive. i just kind of hate how she acts like a know it all. some of the phrasing is repetitive and flowery but boring
Aug 16, 2026 09:54PM
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