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is 66% done
The first half of this book and the second half of this book feel so different. Idk which is better
— Aug 18, 2026 07:03AM
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Bay
is 97% done
I like the internal conflict she's having, it's very raw and real. But is it because she can't remember her past or because we aren't supposed to know it yet? Sometimes it seems like she doesn't remember and other times it seems we are in the dark on purpose, that's where the "hot and cold" feeling comes from. I don't know how I am supposed to feel
— Aug 20, 2026 06:40AM
Bay
is 92% done
I like that it's picking up a little but I'm a little confused with the FMC. She's so hot and cold, there are so many parts of her I feel like I don't understand. One moment she's this bad ass, then the next she's helpless, then she's a bad ass, then she's a master builder. (What happened to that part of her character btw)
— Aug 20, 2026 05:56AM

