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I read chapter 6-10, and the book is boring. I don’t like how conversational the author’s writing style is. She explains everything very blatantly. There is no intrigue. The plot so far is also predictable and nothing interesting has happened. The characters objectify each other, and are unrealistic. They are flat. The storyline is basic and reminds me of a cringey Disney channel movie.

So I took a lot of notes while reading this book from chapter 2 to chapter 6. So far I feel that the book is predictable. It reminds me of high school musical with added sexual activity. I think that Hannah is not so bright as a college student because at the end of chapter 5, she gets into the car of a man who she barely knows, even though she was raped at age 15.

There have been many weird and cringe quotes so far into the book
Hannah: “ but other than my ex, Devon, none of them made my body tingle. The way Justin Kohl does, and that freaks me”

Garret: “.. makes me want to go incredible Hulk on the booklet and repetition shreds.”
“I’m not asking to take off your clothes, baby.“

I also don’t like that in one chapter it’s broken down into duel POV’s