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absolutely putting this on my utter shit shelf.

this author and everything about them and this shit fucking story can fuck off into a deep dark hole under satans toilet . 🖕🏻 🖕🏻 🖕🏻

a tad bit mad so many honest reviewers dnfd this shit
not that i blame them

i started to chapter page skim read at some point until the end

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i cannot express enough how infuriating this fucking was.

this was disgusting.

it was not a romance imo

there was no meet cute
nothing was fucking cute about the hot sex they drunkenly had that one fucking night
i didnt buy into their relationship

for a fucking mafia story

this was fucking atrocious

not enough bloodshed or pain and torture done to the all these shitheads

they all got off too fucking easy

then
the story just fucking ends
the stupidest hea

and a suggestion from this fucking author to check out the next book
matteo the skeevy manwhores story

GAG

💩 i hated this fucking story

i hate the realization bullshit plot twist

the mcs wore masks that night
drunkenly fucked strangers in a closet
she was a virgin??? huhhhhh ????
became pregnant and shit got fucked up

the mmc searched for her for years until that fucking cunt anna showed up with camille

shithead anna and her mother drugged the mmc

im fuming at it all

the story ends with anna dead by mmcs gunshot between her eyes
shithead eduardo hung himself or something
the fucking coward
i needed him to fucking writhe in agony and misery

i alrrafy forgot what happened to the stepmother of the fmcs
annas mother
grandmother to both the kids
and abuser of all of them

what a fucking mess

…. are you FUCKING kidding me

so recap

the mcs drunkenly fucked that night five years ago at the party

the mmc was fooled into thinking the fmcs stepsis anna is his daughters mother

the fmc was constantly abused
then thinking she gave birth to the boy gabriele
who is actually crackhead annas son with shithead eduardo

i really cant with this shit fucking writing
this dumb fucking bitch of an fmc

and this bigger idiot of an mmc

idk what he sees in her besides big tits and tight pussy

yeesh.

the kids plots for both is fucking cringe.
everything is disgusting

and this story is doing everything to put me off of the mafia trope

welp

this is turning out to be trash already

from the mysterious fmc

to the mmc getting hard out of nowhere
bc the fmc is hot???

sir, your young daughter is right there and this is a public space. stop.

then he’s written to be thinking and directing his thoughts to the reader

ughhhh i hate this fucking shit.

i just spent all day slogging through this other mafia adjacent asylum book
long story short
it was a fucking letdown
a boring ass fucking story.

i need to get my mind off it

this is three hundred pages
i hope the writing is decent

😭 🙏

im in a right foul fucking mood rn.

book cover is atrocious
not a fan of shit like this

blehhhhh