Esi’s Reviews > Immortal > Status Update

i mean it’s quite fast 128 pages in and were in love, hes taken punishment for her (why?) and they’ve changed gifts she gave him her hair. VERY ya but i can’t deny its cute

uhhh so is he not going to tell her off for entering the courtyard? he’s just gonna accept her punishment

main character has changed beyond belief?? she’s introduced as sickly and weak and now is saying things with strength - not only isit her just swallowing the lotus flower her mental has changed aswell as her total personality!! would someone who was always sick and weak be speaking with this much conviction?? everything’s totally changed

main character has changed beyond belief?? she’s introduced as sickly and weak and now is saying things with strength - not only isit her just swallowing the lotus flower her mental has changed aswell as her total personality!! would someone who was always sick and weak be speaking with this much conviction?? everything’s totally changed

i thought she was weak and frail, she seems quite strong!

i will admit there is some telling instead of showing, but i’m not mad! easy to read but also nice world building