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Lila (elbenmaedchen)
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I know this story was written during the twilight era, so I can expect much, but what is this writing?!
Examples:
I did. „I do.“
I don’t want to. „But I don’t want to.“
She’s thinking it and then, immediately after, saying it. I‘ts definitely a tad bit annoying, but at least I already knew beforehand that the writing isn’t the best. 😅
Otherwise I’m enjoying the story so far.
— Aug 20, 2026 12:47PM
Examples:
I did. „I do.“
I don’t want to. „But I don’t want to.“
She’s thinking it and then, immediately after, saying it. I‘ts definitely a tad bit annoying, but at least I already knew beforehand that the writing isn’t the best. 😅
Otherwise I’m enjoying the story so far.
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Lila (elbenmaedchen)
is on page 310 of 545
I know this story was written during the twilight era, so I can’t expect much, but what the heck is this writing?
I do. „I do.“
I don’t want to. „But I don’t want to“.
?????
She’s thinking it and then, immediately after, saying it out loud. It’s definitely a tad bit annoying, but at least I knew it wasn’t going to be the best writing, anyway.
Otherwise I’m enjoying the story so far.
— Aug 20, 2026 12:51PM
I do. „I do.“
I don’t want to. „But I don’t want to“.
?????
She’s thinking it and then, immediately after, saying it out loud. It’s definitely a tad bit annoying, but at least I knew it wasn’t going to be the best writing, anyway.
Otherwise I’m enjoying the story so far.