Chii ✨’s Reviews > Steelborn > Status Update
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Ch 4, halfway thru ch5.
She's 21???? And horny as fuck lmao like I guess spend part of the narrative explaining how "big" he is and what you imagine him doing to you. But you're supposed to be thief? Ok. I'm like def not buying it but this world building still on-point tho
— 6 hours, 27 min ago
She's 21???? And horny as fuck lmao like I guess spend part of the narrative explaining how "big" he is and what you imagine him doing to you. But you're supposed to be thief? Ok. I'm like def not buying it but this world building still on-point tho
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Chii ✨
is 10% done
Three chapters in, my thoughts so far:
Ok good intro, interesting world building so far and I like that.
But like tell me why authors make MCs think they can do this impossible "round up money" kind of bs thing after literally releasing a prized individual? LOL ok. w/e fictional
Also like, reya, girl you're suddenly disgusted w/ gavin even though you knew this relationship was purely physical from the get go? ok.
— 17 hours, 51 min ago
Ok good intro, interesting world building so far and I like that.
But like tell me why authors make MCs think they can do this impossible "round up money" kind of bs thing after literally releasing a prized individual? LOL ok. w/e fictional
Also like, reya, girl you're suddenly disgusted w/ gavin even though you knew this relationship was purely physical from the get go? ok.