Anthony DAgostino’s Reviews > Rely on Death > Status Update

This book seriously could use a revision and a rewrite the organizational structure is horrible and way too many over expletive details with little plot progression and concepts that are intriguing but arent elaborated on. Those concepts would really improve the story alot and create mystery instead of frustration and confusion

The beginning is very slow and poorly put together the first chapters first four sentences is she died and was pulled back from the void and then the next paragraph it introduces a slew of characters with no character development. There is little to no contextualization with a lot of exposition.The prologue was rushed and poorly put together this is a debut novel for this author and so far my DNF meter is going off