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Duaa Khalid
is on page 300 of 515
The modern lingo is getting worse and really taking my mind off this otherwise intriguing story!
— Aug 23, 2026 05:21PM
Duaa Khalid
is on page 160 of 515
Nice fast pace on action but the language continues to be too modern for this setting. The characters are beginning to frustrate me with their lack of comms.
— Aug 22, 2026 03:27PM