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Pov switching? Fun! Pov switching but I have to guess who's pov I'm reading from every time? Not fun!
Little emails and text messages in the book? Fun! Emails and messages that are in no way distinguished from normal dialogue? Not fun!
— Aug 25, 2026 08:56AM
Little emails and text messages in the book? Fun! Emails and messages that are in no way distinguished from normal dialogue? Not fun!
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The writing style is so weird. Why are we using 5 commas in a sentence to describe a person while they're doing an action? Why are we saying "God, gorgeous" about a smell? What does "a lot dirty" mean in regards to a laugh? What is going on 😭😭
— Aug 23, 2026 03:38PM