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Melanie Noell Bernard
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Is this supposed to be edgy? Enticing? Erotic? Are we supposed to be endeared to Damen's slave society because it's not as overt as Laurent's? Please! This is dull and unimaginative.
— Aug 26, 2026 05:41PM
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Melanie Noell Bernard
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Writing hasn't improved. Damen has no personality whatsoever. And Laurent is... a minor??
— Aug 25, 2026 04:58PM
Melanie Noell Bernard
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Oof. Besides the poor writing, that prologue set the framework for a toxic relationship disguised as a romance. Here we go, I guess.
— Aug 24, 2026 03:56PM