LillyFran’s Reviews > Clytemnestra > Status Update
LillyFran
is on page 90 of 435
I don’t like where this is going….
I like u Tantalus, but I don’t think ur odds are good.
— 10 hours, 17 min ago
I like u Tantalus, but I don’t think ur odds are good.
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LillyFran’s Previous Updates
LillyFran
is on page 135 of 435
I don’t think this is gonna stay happy much longer
— 6 hours, 11 min ago
LillyFran
is on page 60 of 435
Improving so far -I think I like the character better than the writing
— 12 hours, 3 min ago
LillyFran
is on page 8 of 435
Why is the prose written at a 3rd grade level?
“Clymenestra did this. She can hear that”.
I’m hoping her sentence structure becomes more sophisticated or we’re in for a long ride.
— 16 hours, 37 min ago
“Clymenestra did this. She can hear that”.
I’m hoping her sentence structure becomes more sophisticated or we’re in for a long ride.