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Tiffany
is on page 203 of 498
I just learned that the author embraces WORD VOMITING in her drafts.
I'm curious as to why the extra repetitive words, sentences and phrases were not edited out. IT'S THE MOST INFURIATING PART OF THIS AUTHOR'S WRITING.
FOR EXAMPLE
"One spark. One spark, and the candle would go up, and then the curtains, and then I would have a flame big enough to manipulate."
"we sank down. And down. And down. Until there noth"
— 7 hours, 25 min ago
I'm curious as to why the extra repetitive words, sentences and phrases were not edited out. IT'S THE MOST INFURIATING PART OF THIS AUTHOR'S WRITING.
FOR EXAMPLE
"One spark. One spark, and the candle would go up, and then the curtains, and then I would have a flame big enough to manipulate."
"we sank down. And down. And down. Until there noth"
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Tiffany
is on page 227 of 498
I can't make this stuff up. What are these sentences?!
"She was here. She was coming. We had to go." Pg 227 chapter 25
SHE'S HERE BUT AT THE SAME TIME, SHE'S COMING?!
— 31 minutes ago
"She was here. She was coming. We had to go." Pg 227 chapter 25
SHE'S HERE BUT AT THE SAME TIME, SHE'S COMING?!
Tiffany
is on page 192 of 498
It's falling short of expectations. The "trials" in the underworld could have been better thought out. Right now it's honestly just making a sprint for the relic before wraiths come and get you.
The vampire nobles made it sound so dangerous but it's honestly not. As long as you run faster than the last person, you'll be safe.
— 8 hours, 8 min ago
The vampire nobles made it sound so dangerous but it's honestly not. As long as you run faster than the last person, you'll be safe.
Tiffany
is starting
I bought it before I started book 1.
Round 3 of this nightmare, here I come...
— Aug 28, 2026 11:01PM
Round 3 of this nightmare, here I come...