erch0maii’s Reviews > Wicked Sea and Sky > Status Update
erch0maii
is 27% done
Story has potential, banter is hit-or-miss, prose is kinda uninspired - too much telling, not enough showing, too much exposition. Pacing is a little weird. FMC is painfully horny for MMC and the "tension" between them doesn't feel natural. TL;DR: meh?
— Aug 30, 2026 03:42PM
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