St3ph Aech’s Reviews > The Séance Garden > Status Update
St3ph Aech
is 50% done
Struggling. Because:
"Harper placed the revolver on the table with a heavy thunk. 'I should put that back in the gun safe.'
'That's probably a good idea... it's not loaded, is it?'
'No. Harper took the clip out of her robe's pocket and set it beside the pistol.'
So this pistol is a revolver and revolvers don't have clips. It's stuff like this that pulls me out of the story!
Should I stay or should I go now?
— Aug 30, 2026 11:02PM
"Harper placed the revolver on the table with a heavy thunk. 'I should put that back in the gun safe.'
'That's probably a good idea... it's not loaded, is it?'
'No. Harper took the clip out of her robe's pocket and set it beside the pistol.'
So this pistol is a revolver and revolvers don't have clips. It's stuff like this that pulls me out of the story!
Should I stay or should I go now?
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