Kate Holc’s Reviews > Plot Twist > Status Update

It's tooooo much! It feels like she tried way to hard with the characters. Pansexual FMC, Irish mum and British dad MMC, mention of Non Binary yogi and 2mums for the other.... it's like she's trying to please everyone and anyone... It's a little messy like that. I feel sometimes less is more. Keep it simple.
I will finish it and see how it develops.