chandana ⋆˚꩜｡’s Reviews > The Spear Cuts Through Water > Status Update

So far, this is an incredibly written story! I can’t lie, the prose is a little flowery and excessive at times but I’m able to understand for the most part. I really love the changes in perspective and tenses - makes this a really compelling read. I’m really having a hard time sympathizing with anyone but Keema at the moment because what’s with the blind worship of a random god?