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Ali
is 80% done
If This was edited down/ tightened up it would be so much better. It really is an interesting story
— Sep 02, 2026 04:15AM
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Ali
is 90% done
We already were told about real Dodd and how he had a change of heart. His perspective is a bit of a waste of pages here, adding unnecessary length
— Sep 02, 2026 06:12AM
Ali
is 45% done
Definitely overwritten but its also doing a great job keeping my attention. I like the snippets of Dodd's books, adding more to the uncanny atmosphere
— Sep 01, 2026 12:36PM