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Very Catcher In The Rye esque, even mentions it at one point. It’s a shame it’s about a damn girl who really has no appeal to the reader, due to a lack of detail. Why go back to her if you don’t love her ? Maybe to stress the author’s bipolar disorder. At some points, it feels like this James Montgomery bloke is writing the story instead of Pete. Best part for me is the interactions and dialogue with Animal.
— Sep 03, 2026 10:17PM

