Vanessa ⚔️’s Reviews > On Your Six > Status Update

they better end up in the same fucking deployment. i’m so tired 😩

this book isn’t even that good but the time jumps are fucking killing me.

stop it right fucking now 😭 don’t fucking do this to me 😩

one fucking year 😭

WHO IS HE?????? he, him, he, he, he!!! FUCK!! i love third person but if you write a book about two dudes i need to know who the fuck you’re talking about

my god. the fucking errors are killing me. how do i get a job as a content editor for self published authors??

that’s all we get???? and then Hudson is going to pull the “i’m not gay” and “this doesn’t mean anything” bullshit instead of just talking to Elliot about how he’s feeling?? or even that he’s confused and doesn’t know how he’s feeling!!??? come the fuck on 😭 bro, i’m tired, so tired. can’t we have some fucking communication??? now he can’t open his fucking mouth?? fucking hell.

i hate errors in books 😩