Ryan Matejka’s Reviews > The Final System > Status Update
Ryan Matejka
is 33% done
The story has some interesting ideas that kept me engaged at first, but I've started to notice lots of awkwardness that's making me question whether I want to continue. Namely, there's a lot of underdeveloped worldbuilding thrown around (e.g. random mentions of the different types of bots in a crowd of people - it doesn't serve the story or add any real depth), and the writing is more telling than showing.
— Sep 03, 2026 10:36AM
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