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Britty is 18% done
Does the writing style ever get better, or will it constantly feel like someone is giving a timed summary from a caveman’s POV?First chapters it made sense, she was young and sheltered. Now I’m just confused because every character has a lack of social cues - it’s cringey. idea is fantastic, poor execution. Did she forgot she had to write a book and was like “shit, deadline for this is in 4 days.”
Sep 03, 2026 07:18PM
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