Karen’s Reviews > Evan Burl and the Falling, Vol. 1-2 > Status Update

Hmmm... good beginning, muddy middle, good ending in sight? I still think the story needs to breathe, 'cause I have no idea how all the characters know relate to each. But I also blame myself for possibly not paying enough attention.

Maybe I'm reading too fast, but I feel like I'm missing some things. I need more flesh.

I feel like this story is going by way too fast.

I feel like some parts are missing. If it's intentional, then it's intentional. But I don't feel like I'm reading a novel in the traditional sense. Maybe it's setting I'm missing?