Emma's In Stock’s Reviews > Dead Folk > Status Update

"Even before he had know it was her, Hugh was going to tell her where to go. He was going to do the right thing."
that literally doesn't make any sense. So what, he was just going to finally come and find her and tell her to kill Steele? he hadn't known it was her killing people, only the doctor, so he was going to tell her to go and kill the big boss? wtf is this?

typo should be "you're" not "your"

typo should be a comma and not a semicolon

typo "backdraft" is one word

...wtaf?

typo should be "whose" not "who's"

typo should be "forward" not "foreword"

This is ridiculous. All of a sudden she’s an uber powerful witch? And what about the ferret or whatever she brought back first? What happened to Amos in THAT body? Bc the fox she’s talking about now is just a regular fox, isn’t it?

""Suppose I should have expected that.""
I'm getting sick of Ella needing her little main character moment. STFU AND KILL THIS DUDE BEFORE HE GETS BACK UP HOLY SHIT
Also, if he can read minds, how come he wasn't able to anticipate her moves more?

I'm sorry I like Ella and all, but wtf is she going to do against a bunch of people like this? This is feeling like a trainer is going against the Elite Four and then going against the Champion in a Pokemon game, what is this? I liked the vague idea of necromancy in the first book, but this one is kinda taking it a little to far for my liking, bc what now we have a dude who reads minds?