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how’d you get through this one? i found the writing so lazy

You know how we have respectfully different opinions most of the time. Yeah, this is one I 100% agree. However once I starts, I have to read till the end.
The plot wasn’t half as bad. In addition to amateurs writing (imo) there were times where the author would be like, “oh there’s one, and oh, there’s another one” and as a reader we’d be like, “one plus one is clearly equal to two” but the protagonist would assume it’s minus two which made absolutely no sense. It was, for lack of better words, aggravating at the end and very preteen writing. I think I am being generous with three stars. I think I’ll change it