Nala’s Reviews > Blood Over Bright Haven > Status Update

I called it since the beginning. I knew it. No good twist
Also everything is too on the nose.
And the romance really isn't necessary

Sorry but it's like, quite obvious what's going on with the "forbidden coordinates". I'm hoping for a really good plot twist to prove me wrong or.... Maybe a little bit more subtlety

Heartwarming: racist woman realises she has more in common with a minority than her male peer in a patriarchal society

Very strong begining