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All foam and no beer...
I’m all for the word cunt—I use it quite regularly myself—still, I can’t stand when things are used purely for shock value, and that’s exactly how a lot of this writing comes across. It’s not shocking… It's immature, like a ten year old dropping consecutive F-bombs because he thinks it makes him look cool. It's so over the top that it distracts from what's trying to become a decent plot.
Sep 09, 2026 01:16PM
Puck Around and Find Out (Devlin Mafia, #1)

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